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Nagisa is adorable as usual, I really like the way you coloured the pic and the face + expression are really cute ouo however, when it comes to the cardigan (or sth? D:) he is wearing, I think the folds would be shaped differently judging by the way he's wearing it. Additionally, just some details, the leg which is extended out has a very peculiar looking heel, it's a bit big for the foot, there's usually more of the arch, the heel is also not as round. Also the head looks to be a tad big for the rest of the body. One more thing, I am a bit confused by the direction of the legs and body, because the lower part of the body seems to be turning to the side, while the upper part is facing the viewer. Maybe it's caused by the (lack of more) shading on the arm to the viewer's left? Just some thoughts :) Though all in all adorable, I really like your art :3
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88ms-allie88 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's really good and cute :meow: Good job Derpiies :D
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Ineia Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Adorable!
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